Sunday, June 28, 2009

Michael Jackson Tribute Haiku Comments

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now as i look into the night sky
the little star twinkling, twisting, spiralling
in the farthest corner well that's
the eternal michael jackson
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john tiong chunghoo
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Martin Behrendt 20 April 2010

Sorry. Do you understand what a Haiku is? Because not one of these verses is a haiku in the true sense of the word unless it has been translated from another language and therefor has a totally different number of syllables per line. I also think Jackson was merely a good performer who could dance very well but not so as to confer the status he seemed to attract. Each to their own however...

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Priyanka Bhowmick 29 June 2009

lovely tribute in the form of a haiku.. we shall remember MJ always...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 June 2009

Great tribute to MJ. Lovely write.

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