Thursday, July 16, 2009

Michael Jackson Superstor Comments

Rating: 3.3

Michael I 'm writing this letter to make you and me feel better,
a week's time was my childhood
and a month without you has been a bore,
but at least now they won't spit at you anymore.
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Chrysostomos Tsiailis
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Good, dear bro. Good, but no bazucas. You have walked a long way, but be careful not to be overwhelmed by emotions when you write. it is good to be spontaneous, but no banabas. Nice job here, but always be ware of the small details. LIke, 'Imagine all the people living in' comes from another myth and that would certainly be disturbing to at least half the readers of this poem

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Heather S 16 July 2009

words from the heart, i love michael jackson and he forever live in all of our hearts RIP Michael Jackson

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