Michael Jackson..... Across The Race! 27, June. Comments

(cont.) Did every doctor’s knife and snuff....yes, his nose! and his skin color! well, more mystery with the skin. but it was his body, and it sure didn't decrease his talent. The Race? race as in competition or as in 'color of skin and shape of nose'? ? or both? ? thanks for the memories brought back with a fantastic poem! ! ! :) to MyPoemList and into a future showcase (of poems by PH members) on my PH site. THANKS! and i like the rhyming! ! bri :)

(cont.) Clutching crotch, world he thrust. not would? ? he learned the crotch clutch from me. the moon walk from a U.S. astronaut. Though some people don't believe men ever touched the moon's surface, the MJ moonwalk touched something in many of us; even i tried to do it. maybe i need a hat? Dangled kid from a balcony, limp. wow, i remember THAT! ! ! was it for fun or publicity? it sure got noticed! ! ! (cont.) (cont.)

And in realms was blown to sand. ? i'd be guessing, but some of your references i understand. Neverland (never land) , named for fictional land in story Peter Pan. his ranch. concerned for the bays? or boys? really, we'll NEVER know! (for sure) as when U.S. President Kennedy was shot, i remember where i was and what i was doing when i heard of MJs death. (cont.)

Truly a remarkable write and the writer as well, I love the King of Pop... thank you so much for sharing, Saadat...A plus 10! Cheryl

very aptly put, nice poem...

In hall of fame a foot print burned A page of history has been turned An awesome poem and realistical thoughts.It was worthy Sharing.

Good poem and good ink! Great write!

I so enjoyed this and it is sad that we have lost such an amazing talent. I really do love the music and lyrics of Michael Jackson.... A page in history has indeed been turned!

A well articulated piece written with insight, appraising the ups and downs of a music icon, Michael Jackson. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Built he castles, whatever it took. Alone in a room, he oddly shook. Lovely life story of a star who shined on the skies of east and west. It feels fitting tribute to Michael-one of my fav singer and dancer. Thanks for your thoughtful writting. I really enjoyed reading it.

beautifull piece of work dedicated to michael jackson.impressed! best wishes ritty

Applause...applause! I was awed, a wonderful tribute to the King, well described his great and troubled life, it's all there. The King couldn't deny what you have written about him. Oh...I nearly forgot the rhyming, you're good at it, mate.Well done...thanks

good tribute you pay there to the deceased celebrity singer...well formatted lines Saadat...rhymes galore! 10

oh boy, this is a great description in ur dialect and so... well done..ever best poem for MJ great!

Very witty and well composed stanzas Saadat...great write 10

A very clever entertaining and thoughtful write which I much enjoyed. Steve

A very honest write Saadat, we will remember him for his music, well penned 10 Lynda xx

one of the better poems I've read today

so iam here again after i lost that connection..a truly so beautiful poem, so neat.with full descripton of michael story...you picked all the details and put it wonderfuly in this clean piece..loved it.............

Poor Michael Jackson, I didn't know you were a fan? He truly was a talented and great performer of which I don't think we'll ever see the like again.