Sunday, April 26, 2009

Mexican Sun Comments

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Shining bright in the cloudless sky
Mexican sun: shine down on me
Let your rays kiss my skin
Gently bronzing my pale pigment
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Leah Ayliffe
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Austin Wheeler 09 January 2010

I went to Cancun last July the place of obvious as well as disguised sin pleasure alcohol foggy tattoos the flourescent turquoise water, and yes the sun. It was possibly the best time of my life and I almost didnt board the plane home cause I knew id be going to from this paradise to basic combat training two weeks afterward. I wrote some songs while I was there but the only one I still have and remember is ' the Cancun Tranny' which is about the time I was wandering the strip at 4 am with no shirt a bathing suit and flip flops in a drunken stupor And a tranny hooker tried to rape me in the street. I narrowly escaped with my manhood intact but Im not gonna go into to total detail.It was weird.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 26 April 2009

a soothing and genuine poem my friend..brilliantly displayed with emotion and thought..u amazing!

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Barry A. Lanier 26 April 2009

a beautiful love affair with nature's sun, sounding like Leah has been on spring break, , , , yearning for a return...

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