Friday, October 12, 2018

Metro Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost in the speed of Metro,
Can't find time for oneself.
The mind reacts in the type of stereo,
Calling the home town for help.
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 November 2018

I want to be pedestrian, So, can walk in any tone. Unlucky are the vehicles driven, Whose time and petrol both gone. a very good way of thinking for oneself. i like to be a pedestrian....... then i have time for myself to reflect..... thank u. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 14 November 2018

I am grateful to you sir that you read my poem and commented on that...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2018

Wonderful sketch of city life! Liked the second stanza most! (10)

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Abhipsa Panda 12 October 2018

Thank you sir...feeling glad to read your comments..

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Gajanan Mishra 12 October 2018

deadly are the life in cities, true picture

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Abhipsa Panda 12 October 2018

Yes sir...Thanks for going through my poetry and commenting on that.

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