Metro City Life! Comments

You described concrete jungle very well, modern day city is liked this only, people live with no space to share, Thanks much for such a lovely poem.

Life in metro city is very wisely painted in colors of words here. Such a marvelous poem that amazes mind definitely., Interesting...10

This metro is a big concrete jungle only With people thriving on mechanical way of life...! Very realistic write indeed. Traces of the bounty of nature in the form of activities of free birds are visible only to the rich who reside in top floors of pent houses etc and it shows the hollowness of the saying that all are equal before nature. Enjoyed reading the meaningful and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

you have beautifully painted the scene of metro city with great dexterity, nice poem, i enjoyed reading the poem,