Saturday, June 18, 2016

Metrical Dance Comments

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Come, sweet stranger, follow my steps.
Tis a metrical dance we must progress.
The band is playing and our two hearts beat
In perfect time, and our feet
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Tom Billsborough
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Bri Edwards 28 January 2017

OOPS! premature ejac......... i mean 'submitting' occurred. her is my whole comment: the last line threw me. going from stranger to love? ? that is quite a LEAP! favorite lines: In perfect time, and our feet Trace out in exact rhyme................the time/rhyme rhyme made up for lack of rhyming elsewhere! :) bri :)

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Bri Edwards 28 January 2017

the last line threw me. going from stranger to love? ? that is q

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Tom Billsborough 29 January 2017

Two strangers meet. Their dance is harmonious. Maybe start of a love affair or mutual self-deception?

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