Thursday, October 22, 2009

Meteroric Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Short but torrid their romance.
Lit the heavens every night.
If given only half a chance,
It would have set the world alight.
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Fay Slimm
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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 November 2009

Lit the heavens every night. If given only half a chance, It would have set the world alight.....love enlightens in resplendence, ingenious write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Carol Gall 22 October 2009

you said it all fay 10

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Sandra Martyres 22 October 2009

Short and sweet and a delight to read Fay...10

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Ian Bowen 22 October 2009

Fay, short, sweet, and very neat. Solid piece of work.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Catrina Heart 22 October 2009

wow what a love and what a poem............meteor showers all night!

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Fay Slimm

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