Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Metaphysic Circumlocution Comments

Rating: 5.0

One tree
in the foreground of all trees ever formed,
standing in the wind blowing
above and beyond the norm
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Smoky Hoss
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Dee Corpolongo 30 August 2013

Another totally complex poem, yet simple enough to give thought on the life of a tree, and the feelings we can not see. Excellent! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 23 August 2013

Mystifying indeed Smoky, one could ponder for a long time on this one - very deep.

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Juan Olivarez 21 August 2013

Mystifying write. Perplexing but so wonderful to read.

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Dave Walker 21 August 2013

A great philosophical poem, really like it. A great write.

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Miroslava Odalovic 21 August 2013

Great writing, I loved the intriguing question underlying the last lines 'what/who was cut down...if cut at all', thought provoking, and full of (metaphysical) suspense.

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