Wednesday, July 8, 2009

! ! Metaphors Comments

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Like the unicorn,
they have to need to be;
to hear our need for them to be.
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Michael Shepherd
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Fay Slimm 08 July 2009

Michael the comparisons you use for the metaphor are lucid and enlightening and the end few lines of this verse which pay tribute to the metaphor are most appealing. - - - your expressions seem effortless as always and give much to the reader...... thank you and greetings from Fay..

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