If not nigh sparingly used,
Metaphors might be abused.
Imagine ornaments on a body
Suffocating a nature-born beauty,
Imagine a river in spell,
Flowing above danger level,
Metaphors when poetic lines suppress,
Readers begin to feel the stress.
Figures of speech forge a fine lore,
But seldom if not rare, unheard before,
Yet, all said and done,
There's nothing under this sun
Like simple narrative,
Fresh like anytime nature,
And being most effective,
One that shows a tall stature.
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Reflections |11.04.2020|
Topic: poetry, metaphors
Brilliantly expressed. An outstanding poem on poetry is amazingly shared here. Thanks for sharing.
A well executed composition. Simply excellent.....10++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you dear poets: Kumarmani Mahakul, Kostas Lagos, and Reb Bernard FA. Perhaps, a poem should have a balanced contribution from the head and heart. Any comments?