Sunday, September 25, 2005

Metaphoric Richness Comments

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He smiles at me.
As though the weight
Of psychedelic visions
Were insubstantial
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Pamela Davison
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Michael Fischer 23 April 2007

Great poem! I liked your use of language and how it was written. Nicely done! -Michael

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