Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Metaphor Of Life Comments

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A dawn that breakout from shadows
Sieve the rays of hope in return
Mist that sparkle in silence
That sows the seeds of hope bundle
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SALINI NAIR
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2014

Dusk and dawn that damp eyes...glow the metaphor at rise. Beautifully presented poem my daughter. May God help you in rising ever and you write such beautiful words. My best wishes are for you.

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Amitava Sur 23 September 2014

A thoughtful write life with all the sorrows, hurdles, and joy in it, is detailed nicely here. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 September 2014

Yes this is life despite dawn and dusk existing beside.....pains and pleasure make life more lively....... very insightful and well composed

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