Monday, February 16, 2009

Metaphor For Writing Poetry, Or Hand Me That Hammer Comments

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I'm carefully crafting a ship in a bottle
One wrong move, and the rigging's gone awry.
Painstaking, sure - not too fast but mustn't dawdle -
Delicately, softly give this dance of words a try.
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Heidi K. Haskell
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Myrtle Thomas 19 March 2009

I think I have felt this way before too, can I join your crew. lol. I enjoyed the way you brought the whole poem back around.lovely visuals as I envisioned you toiling away. Great poem

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