! Metaphor Comments

michael who the is downvoting coments here? also who would do that in a poem website?

'dire rear' feels like the bottom is falling out of your world; o) . Loved this little poem, very clever and funny, a pleasure to read.

really funny and interesting poem, i love it honestly _ please take time to read my poem 'Let's Grow up together'

Add a comment.I really enjoyed your talent keep it up

well done great piece of work, thank you for sharing this amazing feeling +++++10

Is it a poem? Seems like a.collection of phrases picked from the air and typed into collective column.

yu u sleazy bastards,

He's got one of the best poems I read... wonder why he is still a rookie?

I like the way you start this poem, A pretty girl is like a simile/ and vice-a-versa...

Nice little piece of music, Michael.

oh yes, for our US readers - 'for a pampered lad'... (did you know it is the most common international word?)

I think I like this poem, Michael. I definitely like the first part. Then I got a little lost, but I liked the imagery and flow anyway.