Metaphor Comments

Nice tribute to Sylvia Plath. Few days back I saw her movie on Amazon Prime, Love returned with a tragic death. Nice poem David.

A tribute so touching........10

Marvellous Metaphor David. Sylvia Plath is one of my favourite poets. Her untimely death has ever remained a mystery.

I KNEW this poem is about SP as soon as I read the word METAPHOR, SP was with me during my study at the university. Tragic end. Tragic poem

Part 4: It does not astonish me to read how David's heart empathises with the great poet.

Part 3: "She had two names, The other, Victoria Lucas. " By leaving her pen-name to the poet's notes, David has endeared the poem to us, by its brevity. David's poetic talent and skill make me an ardent follower of his.

A five stars and myfav is too little for this gem of a poem.

Beautiful poem. Very elegantly penned. But the underlying agony of the poet surfaces often and overtakes the metaphors. In every line, one could read it between the lines.

Every line a metaphor building a netaphor. Thats a rare skill i d kill to have. Great work.

You are a great poet but you can't understand my pain.. By the way this is a wonderful poem.