Metamorphosis Comments

You have such a keen eye for nature and to tell us about it in a beautiful rhyme. Thanks

Beautiful and concise......

Beautifully written, Patricia. And a meaningful message. Loved reading it.

A beautiful and very descriptive poem. I could see this butterfly's Metamorphosis as I read, like watching one of those speed-ed up videos. A wonderful story to read first thing in the morning as I get ready to start my day.

Poem about transition a great message for us why can't change? poets, they try to point out but we are not to accept.. God bless you Patricia for such a lovely thought write and write more 10

Beautiful message delivered as essence in the last line. We can do it. We need to try. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

.............a beautiful poem and so poetic....loved reading this one...