Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Metamorphosis Comments

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Bored within my tightly spun cocoon,
I came out once, breaking my bind
Body light and air least resistant
On wings new, I flew higher n' higher
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Valsa George
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Anjandev Roy 29 October 2019

Magnificent write, as usual.Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev Roy.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 August 2015

It's a great short poem......................................

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 December 2014

A profound thought and a change in form from one stage to the next certainly liberates us unto eternity......Valsa..... short yet great write........

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Asif Andalib 17 November 2012

Short, inspirational and beautiful

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 November 2012

So admirable a short poem with a lofty thought -comparing yourself, the poet, to the metamorphosis of a caterpillar rising as a butterfly.Thanks and kind regards. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Vipins Puthooran 14 November 2012

On wings new, I flew higher n' higher And saw my horizon receding farther n' farther///// Beautiful lines! ! ! Excellent poetry! ! ! !

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Anita Sehgal 14 November 2012

short and sweet... meaningful

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