Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Metamorphosis Comments

Rating: 5.0

The idea of staying on
the edge of a dream
like the winter
melting on its
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Marieta Maglas
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Charles Jagongo Ogola 27 August 2012

Brilliant. I like this poem so much.

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Maitreyee Joshi 18 August 2012

nice poem, marieta! we all stand at the edge of this serendipity!

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Ravi Sathasivam 18 August 2012

Excellent composition. Short but well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

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Munia Khan 18 August 2012

I love the wisdom underneath this short gem Mari.Great insightful piece.

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Munia Khan 18 August 2012

So full of wisdom and insight.I love this fascinating piece Mari.

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Marcus Mckinley 17 August 2012

the dream is the possibility of reality eventually becoming. in turn reality becomes the dream upon waking.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

to give birth to the reality... you always out class poetry.. lovely to read lines and enjoy...10

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Abhinav Baruah 17 August 2012

Outstanding lines... Sweet, short and crisp!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 August 2012

short but full of sense wonderful composition 10/10

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Ramesh T A 17 August 2012

While change is taking place something new also we come across in life by chance! Serendipity is indeed possible!

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Gillena Cox 16 August 2012

more than just seasonal change, your poem themes the issue of newness, something that was never there before enjoyable read

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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