Metamorphosis Comments

I love it! When I read it I was just awe-struck. It shows a lot of emotion.

This....good. Yep. Goood. The fragments at the end give it that alternating pizazz. 'Metamorphosis. Reincarnation. Reinvention. The Change.' As if the whole poem leads up to that moment of 'change.' Haha, this poem reminds me a bit about my own style. And I like how you give tears the ability to scream - iiinteresting! What is the prominent emotion? I feel anger, frustration, and maybe a bit of angst.