Fine poem, Sonny. Excellent imagery. You might consider writing it as
2 stanzas of four lines each. The second stanza could read:
Beauty concentrated,
compressed,
bottled up,
wired to explode.
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Fine poem, Sonny. Excellent imagery. You might consider writing it as 2 stanzas of four lines each. The second stanza could read: Beauty concentrated, compressed, bottled up, wired to explode.