Metamorphosis Comments

good simile with vivid imagery.....this is your metamorphosis as a great poet.

This poem you have given us is way cool, Priya! I like how you use somewhat difficult and descrptive vocabulary in describing your heart as a wounded bird. I hope you continue 'sprouting wings' in your poems most often. Shane

Some pungent seeds have burnt its tongue, but its eyes are all lit with the glorious reflections of their colour; freed.. poem is very sleek...it is nice roe on here..writes with good verses

hi, i like your poem