Wednesday, November 23, 2016

Metamorphoses Comments

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Leaves become sparrows,
Sparrows leaves;
Metamorphoses of shadows
In the elders to the east.
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Tom Billsborough
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Pamela Sinicrope 23 November 2016

You have a way with describing nature...and naturally lit Christmas trees. Beautiful imagers, beautiful words, nice cadence, rhythm, and alliteration. Thanks so much for sharing this!

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Tom Billsborough 23 November 2016

Thanks, Psm. Hope it's okay for Xmas collection.

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