Wednesday, January 8, 2014

Metal Madness Comments

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The metal filings of my mind
Shards piercing a long hidden mine
They stir up pools of brackish brine
And grind, and grind, and grind, and grind
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Margaret O Driscoll 07 January 2016

What a fresh take on the subject, 'metal filings of my mind', 'long hidden mine', and the hope that the force of faith 'pulls all metals to it's pyre', profound poetry! !

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