Saturday, November 1, 2014

Met You Comments

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I once met you, in the middle of a forest.
I pretended I didn't see you.
Your garb so beautiful, your voice so sweet.
It made your grace so complete.
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Vera Sidhwa
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 November 2014

Poem met you-indeed a love poem but twice used the forest- I once met you, in the middle of a forest/On the forest floor you danced. the party or gathering is either very calm and fearful or dull boring except the dance of the beloved..spotting one in the forest with beautiful eyes..love

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 November 2014

wonderful thought and it is well expressed poetically...

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Mac Adrone Adonay 01 November 2014

a beautiful poem. Nicely written.

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