Sunday, December 29, 2024

Messy Dreams Comments

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I have the same dream
over and over and over
again and again and again.
I'm left alone at the house,
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Smoky Hoss
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D.N. Rebb 14 February 2025

This poem is so deep. I had to read it several times, and I still haven't figured out if it is actually just a dream.

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Kim Barney 13 February 2025

This is heartbreaking stuff, Smoky. True life or imagined?

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Smoky Hoss 25 February 2025

True life my friend.

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Glen Kappy 13 February 2025

Smoky, I relate to the 'over and over and over' and the 'again and again and again, ' and to you're closing sentence. Dreams—oy! -Glen

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