Saturday, June 6, 2020

Messiah Comments

Rating: 5.0

Quarantined in a hospital!
Sad and lonely,
so much so,
that,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 June 2020

I feel the happiness and sadness depicted in this poem. So beautifully crafted and clearly conveyed. A timely write that we can all relate to. So deeply poignant and moving. We pray for the safety of all frontliners, the heroes in these times of uncertainty. Onto my Poem List.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 June 2020

messiah gave u a jump sir 408/500 in just one day how will I ever find my way

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Nosheen Irfan 06 June 2020

Very different from your style but very beautifully penned. A big10.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 June 2020

SAD it is no doubt but in the form of ALLAH came she give him her life can't that you see Her voice will for ever ring in the patients ears no fears till death there will be tears in his eyes So be wise INSHAH ALLAH comes in another's garb Remember he exists somewhere in the universe he exchanged his life with hers he has taken her in his own arms and hears now daily her charming voice

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