Thursday, September 7, 2017

Messenger Comments

Rating: 5.0

MESSENGER

There came to me a messenger
As I was teaching in the class,
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Khirod Dalpati
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Gajanan Mishra 11 September 2017

little bee could have a mouth to say, good one.

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Khirod Dalpati 11 September 2017

Thank you for your comments Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

Messenger came and flew near you in classroom during taking class. This whispered about love in your ear. Amazing poem is expressed from perception.10

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Khirod Dalpati 07 September 2017

Than you for your comments Sir. That was a lovely experience of mine.

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Khirod Dalpati 07 September 2017

A bee came, flew around me and sat on my cheek while teaching the class. I was happy that it didn't sting me. My feelings arouse and the outcome was this poem.

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