Thursday, December 8, 2022
Messed Up Comments
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In my messed up world,
the falling went up,
and the forward traveled backwards.
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Meredith Briggs
15 December 2022
Charlotte, I love the style and meaning in your poem. I do have one correction: after ‘the stars came in for dinner' there doesn't need to be a period since the next line is the same sentence. Otherwise it's great! You're very talented!
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7/19/2025 11:18:13 AM # 1.0.0
Maybe put a comma there instead of the period - sorry lol