Tuesday, December 22, 2020

Message In Between Titles- -Number 5 Comments

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.......Hope Is The Thing With Feathers
........And when hope died it told me
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Susan Williams
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 October 2022

Very ingenius Susan very smart

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Anjandev Roy 11 October 2022

Profound piece.......enjoyed it.......thank u, dear poetess....

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Muhammad Ali 21 January 2021

Hi Susan. In between titles, hope died. Dying, said something. A nice and very sad poetic image.

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Muhammad Ali 21 January 2021

Hi Susan,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 January 2021

A poem of great depth. A poem presented uniquely by a one of a kind mind. It takes a great mind to create a new poem structure.Cleverly written.To my Poem List.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 December 2020

Hope, yes, sometimes I define it as a true collaborator of confidence or belief/dependence on self; for every strong hope humankind lives and plans a good future; beautiful your wise expression

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Susan Williams 24 December 2020

Mahtab, when a person has been housebound long enough, the nonsense they will get up to is amazing--actually I rather enjoyed my new poetry form--was much more fun than crosswords! ! Thank you for your comment!

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Bharati Nayak 23 December 2020

Susan, you give a good idea ---Here we remember the famous quotes with due recognition to the original authors and in between we scatter ourselves a little bit and make it whole.

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Susan Williams 24 December 2020

Bharati! ! ! ! You do an excellent explanation of this newborn style---'in between we scatter ourselves a little bit and make it whole.' Very poetic comment, my dear friend! The mark of a true poet! ! !

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Savita Tyagi 23 December 2020

On yesterday's PoemHunter page a poet had connected two paragraphs of Robert Frost's two famous poems. I have connected couple of ancient and modern poems. Connecting two lines seems perfect to me. Whatever appeals to our heart is perfect and beautiful. two lines

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Susan Williams 24 December 2020

Here I thought I was being revolutionary! ! It was a bit of a challenge but a fun challenge! Thank you for encouraging me!

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Quoth Theraven 22 December 2020

Susan, I'm sure the poets you chose to remember would be flattered. Your poetry has to mean something to you first, or it wil mean less to others. Yuletide Wishes and My best wishes for you my friend. -QtR

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Susan Williams 24 December 2020

Ah, Mr. Quoth, I just had an idea! ! ! I will insert a comment between two of your poems' titles and see what happens. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays and stay safe, my friend! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 22 December 2020

They're all so good! Miss Emily, flying there You better put a patent on Nothing is safe from theft Under the sun, All kidding aside, I really like them! Keep it up. Have a wonderful Xmas and a happy, healthy New Year!

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Susan Williams 24 December 2020

Thank you, Sandra, just having a bit of fun on a cold Covid day. Happy Holidays to you. Sandra, but stay safe!

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