Message Ethereal...Part 1 Comments

I have read 'Meghadhootam' and i am an admirer of Kalidasa's works....it became easy for me to slip into the plot and flow of ur version....well started....hope it will gain upon the vast knowledge of kalidasa abt people, places, flora and fauna....which u already seem to project! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! My best wishes for ur venture! ! !

Interesting indeed..I like narrative poems...for instance I read sinahala translations of Homer's Odyssy at very young age....And nice of you to translate Mega Dhootham in to English..I ll be back..

A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++

Sad. From someone living in the west I can only say this is very interesting. A 10+++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

Great expressions! It is a fitting tribute to the great Poet Kalidas. Great service to people who can't read Sanskritized version of Kalidasa. May your valiant efforts continue.

This was a good write But I felt it was 2 long

very touching... great write with classical touch.. very dignified write...matured and serious one A masterpiece... love is wonderfully expressed and the mystery of life a very complete write and a touch of mythology... makes it wonderful and enchanting.. 10++++

Your poem is effective and you have effortlessly paved the way for very easy reading..........pristine thoughts and well expressed. The note at the bottom is very informative too. Thanks Kesav for sharing.............arya

Dear Easwaran Sir, You are doing a courageous and wonderful job by Introducing Great Poet Dramatist Kalidasa to serious readers and writers of literature. By bringing out a masterpiece of SriKalidasa's work Megha Dhooth By your on independent pen requires a lot of effort and insight. I hope you will succeed. So far you have done a wonderful job with apr vocabulary.May 'kaali Bless you' Greetings Satheesan Rangorath

wonderfully portrayed..... mythology and poetry very well fused... thank you.

so beautiful so moving i agree with mark i think your writing about love but if i'm wrong who cares because this is one of the most MAGNIFICENT poems i ever laid eyes upon of.........i can never rate this poem because there is no number for the truth thats written here

Kes, my dear friend, I'm not sure I follow you completely, but I think you're writing about love and I'll say let love reign supreme, even if the gods deign it differently. So go ahead and love your wife and let all else flow down the hill into the abyss. Is this a fair comment? Mark

the poem is ethereal, thanks for sharing. particularly liked the last stanza. Naseer has captured its essence in a few words. i had read it two days ago, then my system crashed. 10 Mamta

keshavji, hats off for a terrific effort.....thanks.....loved it....

Beautiful, Kesav. A unique blend of myth, meatphor, imagery, wisdom and poetry. Will be waiting for the upcoming verses. Regards Naseer

I am not familiar with the works of Kali Dasa, but I do love what you have written. It seems Mythological. The Crime is with the cruelness and the selfishness of the Gods and the abuse of their power over their subjects. For the Gods to win the Love and loyalty of their Servants they would have to Love...Excellent...

Nice lines Kesav.Bravo!

astoudingly thinking and probing, sir, it is long time since i read a piece like this. references make it a little laborious though, it does serve a great job of making those ones separated and united think that it is really painful to be so in either way. thank you sir. jaypee

hmmm.. an interesting piece here... :)

Just awesome! a stunning imagery well composed. Thanks for sharing one of the best poem I have read.