Message Ethereal...Part 4 Comments

i am so thankful to you keshav sir, for presenting to us the message etheral through your poems.i enjoy reading them a lot.thanks!

this is soo beautiful sir....I specially liked these personifications..it makes the poem soo alive... 'The mountain kings that protect bounds Thinking another one of seamless bounds, Might try to stop you as them you cross; Careful you be not to combat them; ' imagery, the language all grasp the reader's heart like an enchantment... great work...

The beauty of Kalidasa is that he is so purely Indian, but not sacred, he freely crosses over the bouderies to human nature as he perceived it to be in his times, some empiricism of that age. This is a great job, which needs quite an understanding of his works by you, Kesav. Thanks for shring.10 ++

i wish i could read the entire version at one go.....but have to wait, the beauty of this poem keeps magnifying with seasoned words from ur ripe pen!

the anxiety, tension, gentle coaxing of Yaksha to the cloud has a sort of immediacy, which arouses myriad emotions while readind it. actually I feel Kesav, i would love to hear you recite it with voice modulations and all the emotions you have so beautifully expressed here. great. i am going to compile all for my reading pleasure. thanks Kesav 10++++ Mamta

Your lines move like music through the stanzas. It is another world, another life, another time and yet the emotions expressed are as immediate as today. Your message is as luminous as bright threads on a tapestery. Lovely. Always your friend, Sandra

Thank you for Ethereal Message Part 4 Kesav....it is beautiful and am eagerly awaiting Part 5...as I said before you have opened up a whole new world of poems for your readers by drawing on Kali Dassa's Megha Dhootam...10++

a waiting maids heart is a soft flower...alovely write with a lot of beauty

nice and great effort takes a lot of hard work to get a piece like this cheers