Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Message En Clair Comments

Rating: 3.4

Do not shoo off the harbinger of love
Approaching your imperial yard, with a
Coveted message gently pressed to its fluffy chest.
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Seema Aarella
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Obinna Eruchie 30 August 2009

A very charming poem. The rose is personified as the messenger of love with a love note upon its slender neck, does remind of Dorothy Parker's 'A Perfect Rose'.

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a wonderful message told beautifully without its depth being lost...a great poem

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Reshma Ramesh 02 July 2009

seems....can't be ignored the message..........very well written.........beautifully done..

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Saadat Tahir 02 July 2009

Thus reads the little message en clair O chagrined man! See with impartial eyes And recognize the world ample with signs of love. very nice tender romantic and catchy.... beautiful write cheers

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Mamta Agarwal 02 July 2009

lovely poem well crafted, straight from the heart. message conveyed gently with good imagery. 10 Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

good poem...good message...good song on love...thanks Seema...10

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Indira Babbellapati 02 July 2009

of miss-es and regrets...is how the world goes...

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premji premji 02 July 2009

love is our very being........... sad why don't the world remember that?

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beautiful and unique words..very beautifully written

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Priyanka Bhowmick 30 June 2009

wonderful flow of words....

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Rakesh Bedi 30 June 2009

..... beautiful composition, Seema!

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