Wednesday, April 10, 2019

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Mild cool breeze, in the yellow dusk
Sliding down the distant mountain
Kissing beige canopy, lamenting
Lowered on to a parched meadow
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2019

Clouds are gathering! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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H.Chandrasena De Silva 17 April 2019

Not only grass even fish out of water may be feeling like that hoping for a drop of water.Hardship hope and disappointment been projected with a rich vocabulary. A Good poem.

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Thank you Chandre for your comment.

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Suchiththa 10 April 2019

Lovely poem, Thatti

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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