After achieving my first goal, they tell me I've succeeded,
The next day, I was inwardly bored and very depressed.
Once I related myself to the One of limitless power,
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Was should be have. Your sense of purpose and satisfaction shines through.
The definition of success is different. May I think, living a happy life is also a kind of success? At least, when we are happy, our heart is sunny warm and healthy. Your poem is thought-provoking. I enjoyed it.
this is a really beautiful piece of work..keep striving to be the best in everything!
Unless you cherish an insatiable hunger for achieving your goals one by one there is no meaning to live a long life. It will be dull and insipid. But you have zeal to go on. Loved it.
My wish is to live the longest day To meet all my goals before I pass away. The poem exploring the hidden real human nature and telling the way to achieve satisfaction and happiness in life.Thanks for sharing.
According to Maslow's Law of Motivation, 'Self actualization' remains at the top of Motivational pyramid.When our one goal is satisfied, if we do not set another goal, we will be bored.You keep yourself motivated and passionate about your life.A nice poem, thanks for sharing.
Once I related myself to the One of limitless power, I leash my limits to build my success higher than their tower, relying on the limitless power above. you are on the right path dear poet. tony