Mess With Me! …. (Raving Rant) Comments

Some vocabulary items are jibberish to me! Yet, you've managed to tune down the tension of the real scene. The ryhme sounds well-chosen.

Eye for an eye. Ear for an ear. Biblically just. Devoid of fear just to remind you: bible say if the person slap you on one side of the face, show him other side...it's not eye for eye and ear for ear.. :)

mushkil han, need to look my dictionary....... for all those guck, muck, puck etc

Humour is making life bearable, you seem to have it, keep it up.10+++

Good description, humour...I like it.10+++

Very interesting write, love it.10+++