Saturday, October 10, 2020

Mesmerizing Moments.. Comments

Rating: 4.4

And rain was the real player
Cajoling them to be together
Enjoying every moment
Adding meaning robust.
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Varsha M
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 14 October 2020

Great picture, fascinating imagery and a scintillating poem showing two lovers in the rain making the best out of available occasion.

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2020

Nice lines: Freeing myself in the rain Seeing her like a little kid in the rain.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 11 October 2020

Humans get The bliss When they Are in water. May be the Nostalgia Of womb. It works Varsha, nice poem

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Dipak Adhya 11 October 2020

I often wonder, from where do you get such sensational picture... Classic... Beautiful.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 October 2020

A well penned poem. Truly magnificent....5 stars*****

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 October 2020

I WAS ABOUT to go today till i came across your comment stay why think of death today you have got a long way to grow so stay on yet You saved me from my last breath

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

'And rain was the real player Cajoling them to be together' loved these lines, and agree 'Drenched wet as the happiest' can be a life experience. I once spent an entire day with a friend Jim Herman, walking the entire day in heavy rain, fleet, hail, flooding; during a week long hike walking the Heaphy Track in both directions when we were in high school. We saw no one else out, the world was totally ours. Just us, the rain, the bush.

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Kostas Lagos 10 October 2020

Well written Varsha! Five stars!

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Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2020

I have read M Asim Nehal's 'Two Lovers' too. The two are complementary to each other.

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