Monday, December 14, 2009

! ! ~~ Merry Xmas ~~! ! Comments

Rating: 3.8

The wind carries soft whispers
that winter has preserves for me.
The morning sun opens its eyes,
Rays struggle to see through the fog.
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Nikunj Sharma
fog
COMMENTS
Marilyn Lott 11 March 2013

This is a beautiful and sensitive look into the heart of Christmas. Sweet and thoughtfully written. Warm Wishes,

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Lynda Robson 15 January 2010

Great imagery, a heart warming poem, hope you had a great Christmas, and it can be sled or sledge (same meaning) 10 Lynda xx

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Melanie Johnson 12 January 2010

What a beautiful poem Nik! ! I gave it a 10! You are extremely talented. =)

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Anjali Sinha 31 December 2009

A belated MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND FAMILY DEAR NIKSSSSSSS good write -10 anjali

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

this one is awesome!

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Eyan Desir 28 December 2009

Well merry christmas to you too good write

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Kimberly Lindsey 28 December 2009

Very nice... up and expectant. I enjoyed!

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Mamta Agarwal 25 December 2009

Awell crafted poem, you set up the setting for a Xmas eve, all with well lit tree, and hopes soaring, pondering over Santa's plight. the last stanza a beam opens thoughts into points where no sunlight reaches. A thousand splendid suns illuminate spirit's dark alleys this stanza is open to multiple interpretations, hall mark of a great poet. Merry xmas and a happy new year. Mamta

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Ken E Hall 24 December 2009

great poem with a great ending thank the lord for xmas for giving work to far away poor putting silver balls in little bags for little faces with little smiles and a merry xmas to you too Nik++++10 regards

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Jessica Unruh 24 December 2009

i loved your poem alot it is wonderful

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Fay Slimm 24 December 2009

'A thousasnd spendid sun' adorn your Xmas poem - - thank you Niks. and warmest of greetings from Fay.

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Nikunj Sharma 24 December 2009

Splendid expressive seasonal poem crafted with skill and delight.10 Best wishes from Orlando

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An excellent poem....i loved it... Sir, ur style of writing is a cent percent poetic one...as the old poets use to write...like oscar wilde...P.B. Shelley etc. Their The real meanin of their poems can be understand by readin more than once... Same case with u... :)

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Ency Bearis 24 December 2009

A splendid x-mas poem.....remarkable.........10

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Nikunj Sharma 24 December 2009

Message from Walterrean Sally: Your beautiful prose And lovely rhyme Cheer me at This special time. And I am wishing You the best For peace and love, And happiness. Merry Christmas! And Happy Holidays!

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Raj Nandy 24 December 2009

IT WAS NICE READING YOUR POEM ON THIS CHRISTMAS EVE! 10! WISHING YOU A MERRY CHRISTMAS TOO! -Raj

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 23 December 2009

Lovely, it reminded me of an innocent time when cristmas wasn't a comercialised farce, and captures the essence of what i think a lot of people will centimentally remember christmas this way

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 23 December 2009

could see the little child in you nikunj in the poem and in your comments on your poem..the poem was sweet althrough..from the divine courier to extending line of presents..the last lines open up a new world like christmas does a new year....beautiful

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Sandra Fowler 23 December 2009

Beautiful write. Your last stanza says it all. Merry Chistmas, dear Nikunj. And thank you for your warm friendship in 2009. Friends at poemhunter, Sandra

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Aira Olayvar 23 December 2009

♫ ♪ MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE ♫ ♪ As invited, so I am here… It is a nice poem, for me, yes it is… though we are people of different minds and opinions… let’s just continue doing what we love to do. Playing with the words especially if it is for good is such a wonderful event. I am just new in this site but I start loving it. I’ll be reading and writing you guys around.

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