The wind carries soft whispers
that winter has preserves for me.
The morning sun opens its eyes,
Rays struggle to see through the fog.
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Great imagery, a heart warming poem, hope you had a great Christmas, and it can be sled or sledge (same meaning) 10 Lynda xx
What a beautiful poem Nik! ! I gave it a 10! You are extremely talented. =)
A belated MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND FAMILY DEAR NIKSSSSSSS good write -10 anjali
Awell crafted poem, you set up the setting for a Xmas eve, all with well lit tree, and hopes soaring, pondering over Santa's plight. the last stanza a beam opens thoughts into points where no sunlight reaches. A thousand splendid suns illuminate spirit's dark alleys this stanza is open to multiple interpretations, hall mark of a great poet. Merry xmas and a happy new year. Mamta
great poem with a great ending thank the lord for xmas for giving work to far away poor putting silver balls in little bags for little faces with little smiles and a merry xmas to you too Nik++++10 regards
'A thousasnd spendid sun' adorn your Xmas poem - - thank you Niks. and warmest of greetings from Fay.
Splendid expressive seasonal poem crafted with skill and delight.10 Best wishes from Orlando
An excellent poem....i loved it... Sir, ur style of writing is a cent percent poetic one...as the old poets use to write...like oscar wilde...P.B. Shelley etc. Their The real meanin of their poems can be understand by readin more than once... Same case with u... :)
Message from Walterrean Sally: Your beautiful prose And lovely rhyme Cheer me at This special time. And I am wishing You the best For peace and love, And happiness. Merry Christmas! And Happy Holidays!
IT WAS NICE READING YOUR POEM ON THIS CHRISTMAS EVE! 10! WISHING YOU A MERRY CHRISTMAS TOO! -Raj
Lovely, it reminded me of an innocent time when cristmas wasn't a comercialised farce, and captures the essence of what i think a lot of people will centimentally remember christmas this way
could see the little child in you nikunj in the poem and in your comments on your poem..the poem was sweet althrough..from the divine courier to extending line of presents..the last lines open up a new world like christmas does a new year....beautiful
Beautiful write. Your last stanza says it all. Merry Chistmas, dear Nikunj. And thank you for your warm friendship in 2009. Friends at poemhunter, Sandra
♫ ♪ MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE ♫ ♪ As invited, so I am here… It is a nice poem, for me, yes it is… though we are people of different minds and opinions… let’s just continue doing what we love to do. Playing with the words especially if it is for good is such a wonderful event. I am just new in this site but I start loving it. I’ll be reading and writing you guys around.
This is a beautiful and sensitive look into the heart of Christmas. Sweet and thoughtfully written. Warm Wishes,