Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Merry Xmas (Growing Apart) Comments

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we were so close
kindred spirits
who knew every inch
of each other's souls
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Nika McGuin
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Bri Edwards 09 August 2018

been here; let me look at another. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 12 August 2014

Nika, i like the use of resounding, a word i guess i've heard but was unfamiliar with. it is good when one knows when enough is enough, and that an attempt to get things back to 'the way they were' will not work for that one. stanza four almost threw me with its sudden change of direction. well done. i can't say i've been super close to anyone in my life; not even wives i guess. so i'm saved the pain. thanks for sharing. goes to MyPoemList. of course, now the question (rhetorical) is did this happen to you? . bri :)

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