Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Merman Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind crept in from the southern gulf
And it rustled through the trees,
As clouds flew over, covered the sun
In some vast conspiracy,
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David Lewis Paget
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Rich in responsibility/ a mighty message that needs to be heard. Well done my friend.

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Chris Blazo 17 August 2012

Great poem of omens. Flowed with elegance and kept me interested. Thank you, David.

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Valerie Dohren 12 August 2012

Brilliant write David, love this one - so imaginative, but telling a tale of truth.

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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