Sunday, August 2, 2015

Mermaids Comments

Rating: ★5.0

A group of naughty dolphin girls,
With the exposed cuts and curls,
Planned a kidding game,
With the old sea, shame,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 03 August 2015

A lovely limerick! Enjoyed! I think in limerick, your first attempt! Well begun!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 August 2015

No Valsa, it's second. The previous one, Limerick Of His Majesty The Parrot, you have read and commented.

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2015

An enjoyable, fun rhyme. Thanks

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Khalid Saifullah 02 August 2015

A meaningful limerick...............................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2015

So attractive and amusing. A stunning write. Enjoyed. TFS. .....10

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