Mermaid's Tears Comments

lovely poem... i like it

Maybe the sparkling pieces of glass, Were not really theirs to keep, So every day, when the tide goes out, They toss them back onto the beach. what a sweet and based on a legend of mermaid.. which is one of my favorite stroies.. you did with very great way..logic and the verses are joint to each other very perfectly..flow of poem is melodic and thoughful idea has exppressed here..seems that you have enough ability to write good poems..well done

Beautiful imagery and rhythm. Love it, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

you made my inmagination sit up and take notice of this poem. a pleasure to read of mermaids at play.

nice visual metaphor: ''Beautifully sculpted sea glass, Is mermaid’s tears they say'' vivid imagination, well written poem........10

lovely poem, paints a pretty picture