Sunday, October 30, 2022

Mermaid On The Loose Comments

Rating: 5.0

She swims in from the salty sea;
she's tired of living there.
She wants to see some human sights;
she'll travel anywhere.
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Belle Wassermeister
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Kim Barney 04 September 2024

This may be the best story you ever came up with. I just thoroughly enjoyed reading it again.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2024

I laughed (softly) at this: 'but I am old and did not care, at least ‘til I saw you.'' And I love the transition between stanzas 2 & 3 of Part 3.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2024

AND...a 'flounder' is also noun, the name of an ocean fish! ! Oh, Belle, you are clever, almost like me. ;)

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M.J. Lemon 22 November 2022

What a great poem! The Sasquatch and the Mermaid...takes me back to memories of the carnival and days long gone. There was a 10 in 1 tent that I think housed both mermaid and Yeti....

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Belle Wassermeister 04 September 2024

MJ, thanks so much for the comment.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 November 2022

Your interesting story captivated me! I really loved the happy ending, too.

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Belle Wassermeister 04 September 2024

Evelyn (or should I call you Judy?) , thank you for commenting.

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Carl Roussell 31 October 2022

So glad she made it back! Enjoyable story

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Belle Wassermeister 04 September 2024

Carl, thank you for the comment.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 31 October 2022

great story on mermaid; nice series

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Belle Wassermeister 04 September 2024

Mahtab, thank you. I appreciate the comment.

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Kim Barney 30 October 2022

Best Fish story ever! To my favorites.

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Belle Wassermeister 04 September 2024

Dear Kim, thanks for the comment and for making it a favorite.

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2022

Ok, later this week I may return and crown your tail (oops, I meant tale) with being one of my favorites. bri : ) Bravo.

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Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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