Saturday, October 29, 2022

Mermaid On The Loose [part 5] Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ape-man runs with lightning speed
and puts her in the seat
of a black car that's sitting there;
she wishes she had feet!
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Belle Wassermeister
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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

READERS: I, Bri, also have written of mermaids, but Belle has beaten me soundly in her quest for fame. : ((

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

The Little Mermaid (Danish: Den lille Havfrue) is a bronze statue by Edvard Eriksen, depicting a mermaid becoming human. The sculpture is displayed on a rock by the waterside at the Langelinie promenade in Copenhagen, Denmark. It is 1.25 metres (4.1 ft) tall and weighs 175 kilograms (385 lb) .

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

Belle, My ONLY regret upon finishing all of my reading is that I found NO typos, and NO ice cream to have for eating.

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

Belle, I'd quickly bring out my camera, a Polaroid or a Kodak Instamatic, to take many photos of Mermaid's chest which causes me feelings-ECSTATIC. Thanks so much, Poet dear. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

THIS: 'With little effort, so it seems, he turns them upside down! ' gave me a little chuckle. 'Chuckles! ' Yum, yum, a candy of my youth. : )

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 30 October 2022

mermaid on a rock now in rest~rest in peace! ~ nice to read

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Cowboy Ron Williams 29 October 2022

Bravo! The sleight-of-hand leprechaun and the heavy-handed Sasquatch come through as true heroes!

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Kim Barney 29 October 2022

A five-star finish to this story! Love it!

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Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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