Mermaid On The Loose [part 3] Comments
The mermaid wakes up in a daze;
she cannot see a thing.
There's something bound around her eyes;
her left arm's in a sling.
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Belle, I 'love' how you 'segue' from stanza 2 to stanza 3. ;) Well, it may be a movie and/or piece of music someday.
You have done a masterful job with all three parts of this story! I love it. Kudos to you!
A fantastic tale with exquisite rhyming! To my favorites list!
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7/28/2025 2:28:23 AM # 1.0.0
'A puny wrinkled man inside seems of an advanced age.' So, Kim Barney IS there! ?