Mermaid On The Loose [part 2] Comments
The mermaid puts the Jeep in gear
and cruises through the town.
Attention she tries to avoid,
so she keeps the speed down.
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'and slams into the rail.' perhaps use 'into guardrail'? The Mermaid is proceeding swimmingly. Carry on.
If Mermaid never owned a comb, I guess she never went 'beachcombing'
Thank you, Kim. I wasn't sure if I should write a continuation or not. That's why the question mark at the end...
Ha! She fishtails around a corner! Very clever subtle pun!
Thank you, Cowboy. I wondered if anyone would catch the connection.
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7/27/2025 3:49:13 PM # 1.0.0
Gee, Belle aka this and that, Did you Delete All comments which I THINK I left years ago? ? Or...maybe PH....no! ! PH wouldn't dare, would it? ? ? ? : (