The mermaid puts the Jeep in gear
and cruises through the town.
Attention she tries to avoid,
so she keeps the speed down.
She passes Sunset Boulevard,
and then Rodeo Drive.
The wind is whipping through her hair,
and she feels so alive!
On Mermaid TV she has seen
this city and its sights,
and she is thrilled with everything,
the people and the lights.
But now some people start to stare,
and she feels far from home.
Her hair is flying everywhere;
she's never owned a comb.
A cop car starts to follow her;
she doesn't see the need,
but panic starts to fill her soul,
and she picks up her speed.
Then she remembers one small fact:
she's in a stolen car!
She guns the engine totally,
but she won't get too far.
She takes a left on Avalon,
then fishtails right on Main,
then finds herself a bit confused
and heading for a train!
The mermaid loses all control
and slams into the rail.
It's hard to work both gas and brake
with one big floppy tail.
[to be continued... ]
Gee, Belle aka this and that, Did you Delete All comments which I THINK I left years ago? ? Or...maybe PH....no! ! PH wouldn't dare, would it? ? ? ? : (
'and slams into the rail.' perhaps use 'into guardrail'? The Mermaid is proceeding swimmingly. Carry on.
If Mermaid never owned a comb, I guess she never went 'beachcombing'
Thank you, Kim. I wasn't sure if I should write a continuation or not. That's why the question mark at the end...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ha! She fishtails around a corner! Very clever subtle pun!
Thank you, Cowboy. I wondered if anyone would catch the connection.