Mermaid On The Loose [part 2] Poem by Belle Wassermeister

Mermaid On The Loose [part 2]

Rating: 5.0


The mermaid puts the Jeep in gear
and cruises through the town.
Attention she tries to avoid,
so she keeps the speed down.

She passes Sunset Boulevard,
and then Rodeo Drive.
The wind is whipping through her hair,
and she feels so alive!

On Mermaid TV she has seen
this city and its sights,
and she is thrilled with everything,
the people and the lights.

But now some people start to stare,
and she feels far from home.
Her hair is flying everywhere;
she's never owned a comb.

A cop car starts to follow her;
she doesn't see the need,
but panic starts to fill her soul,
and she picks up her speed.

Then she remembers one small fact:
she's in a stolen car!
She guns the engine totally,
but she won't get too far.

She takes a left on Avalon,
then fishtails right on Main,
then finds herself a bit confused
and heading for a train!

The mermaid loses all control
and slams into the rail.
It's hard to work both gas and brake
with one big floppy tail.

[to be continued... ]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 19 October 2022

Ha! She fishtails around a corner! Very clever subtle pun!

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Daisy Mallard 20 October 2022

Thank you, Cowboy. I wondered if anyone would catch the connection.

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

Gee, Belle aka this and that, Did you Delete All comments which I THINK I left years ago? ? Or...maybe PH....no! ! PH wouldn't dare, would it? ? ? ? : (

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

'and slams into the rail.' perhaps use 'into guardrail'? The Mermaid is proceeding swimmingly. Carry on.

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2024

If Mermaid never owned a comb, I guess she never went 'beachcombing'

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 October 2022

This is a very interesting and hilarious tale! .

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Deacon Gestant 22 October 2022

Thank you very much, Evelyn!

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Kim Barney 19 October 2022

Fabulous five-star story. Keep it coming!

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Daisy Mallard 20 October 2022

Thank you, Kim. I wasn't sure if I should write a continuation or not. That's why the question mark at the end...

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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