Wednesday, January 13, 2016

Mermaid Girl (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mermaid girl, swimming

Big brown eyes, with soothing smile
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Chinedu Dike 09 June 2019

A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Thomas.

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Douglas Scotney 13 January 2016

5-7-5 says 'haiku' is something other than 5-7-5

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Thomas Plotz 14 January 2016

Dear Mr. Scotney, at the bottom of the poem the form states Haiku - I either mark a poem Haiku or 5-7-5 in the title, due to some people don't like a Haiku; therefore they know what to expect. Thank you for your comment, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 January 2016

Soothing smile is wonderfully expressive in this sharing...

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Thomas Plotz 14 January 2016

Thank you Kumarmani for your comment Sir.

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