Thursday, September 18, 2008

Mermaid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not with cascading shimmering tresses,
Head bent slightly on her delicate neck,
Gazing at the gentle sea
Does this one perch.
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Fay Slimm 10 October 2008

This is quite a twist on the conventional mermaid. Glad I don't meet her in the twilight on the beach. Good wordpower though Kev.10

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Kesav Easwaran 19 September 2008

your this cute imaginative poem also rocks...well done, Kevin...10

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Kevin Eaglesfield

Kevin Eaglesfield

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