Thursday, July 2, 2020

Mermaid Comments

Rating: 4.5

we met in glass jars
on the Beagle in the Pacific
I'd never seen anything
like you before, your hair, your smile,
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Clive Culverhouse
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Clive Culverhouse 02 October 2023

This poem is on PoetrySoup, here's a comment 'This is absolutely stunning! Loved it! Mermaid that title brought me here and i must say the way you've written in a descriptive flow is captivating and very soulfully poetic. Enjoyed reading this narrative'

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Clive Culverhouse 01 October 2023

A narrative upon how things are over eons of time and if things remain the same over the many lifetimes that are relived. One day, in one lifetime, things might be different for those in their glass jars.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 July 2020

o piece of world no ended story dreamy, full colors of love on the blue sea death more than any feelings breath from the fathom of touching it's a slippy hug from the crystal water the Mermaid dear.........

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Clive Culverhouse 05 July 2020

a poetic exchange thanks for supporting my poem Mermaid

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